Sunday, October 30, 2016
"Springfield Money Stolen from HMS"
On October 18 there was an unfortunate accident that took place on the school Heritage Middle School. The Springfield field trip money was stolen. 8th grade students were informed the next day at breakfast by their homeroom teachers. Ms. Hauer made a video explaining what had happened, she then shared it with all eighth grade teachers, but she didn't give much information. Ms.Hauer had many things to say about this incident, one was, “This is not a time to point fingers, but to tell teachers any information you know.” The money was stolen from the school but the exact location is unknown. Students were very distraught and devastated because they wanted to go on the field trip. Many students from Heritage were trying to determine who was the colporate that stole the money, so they started pointing fingers. Heritage students were also trying to put the puzzle together and figure out why the person did it. This is not the first time something like this happens. If anybody knows any useful information report it on “Stop It” or tell a teacher.
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The story talks about an accident that had happened in Heritage Middle School, a student had stole the springifield money that the 8th grader where going to use for their field trip. They were not sure who had stolen the money. The students knew about this because Mrs. Hauer had shared a video saying that they currently didn't have enough mioney for the eight graders to attend to Sprinfiled . Throughout your writing your organization of your events helps the reader understand what your talking about in your story and how everything happened. I liked it how you had Supporting details and I also liked how you changed easy words into more challenging words that still meant the same. After all , this was a nice start.
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